Awesome, lol!
Was about time it was published!
Good work everyone!
Awesome, lol!
Was about time it was published!
Good work everyone!
Thanks for being a part of the team.
The art was really good, but the voices could definitely be better.
There was quite a bit of noise and there was probably a low quality microphone used.
You should create a noise filter to get rid of the noise.
Would improve it by a lot.
The audio is pretty old and not mine so there was no way to improve that. Maybe it's in my export settings?
I like the style and quality!
There's room for improvements, but of course improvements come with time and trial.If you were to perfect this episode alone, that could take you a very long time, so I'm glad it was released now. You'll gradually improve over time.
I'm also aware that the quality of my voice acting isn't that good in this episode, but this was the first project I ever joined as a voice actor, but I've learned how to make better quality audio and remove noise properly. It'll be better in later episodes.
Thanks man, I can't wait to get into the next episode!
Lol, this is great!
Thanks Magnus :D
Lol, this is what I assume happens every now and then in the forest when there are no players to mess around with. When he's just aimlessly walking around.
Sure it might be a little under the average of quality when it comes to front page content, but I don't think people should look away from that this is pretty simple humor, and it's still funny.
I think people get more caught up in judging it for the front page than the animation itself.
I give it 3 stars for the humor, but not more because the animation and sound quality isn't as good as it could be.
Keep making animation! Good luck!
thanks, this actually happened to me once too, lol, although it was only on my arm
Not too bad for your first, but it was rather short.
Tip: Next time, try to use slightly thicker lines on your animated characters and such.
Especially the very outline on your characters should be a little thicker than the normal lines.
It makes everything look much better.
Also if you're going with a completely black outline, make the black clothing or hair slightly brighter.
Not exactly gray, but a slightly brighter shade of black.
Of course it's up to you if you want to use my tips or not, but I'm throwing this out there so that you know that you have several options. Keep doing this and try to improve, and you'll see that you'll get better.
Once again, not bad for your first.
thanks alot those are great tips and are very helpful. ill make sure to this the next time thnx
"You just shot me in my foot!"
"It happens..."
Looool
I'm so glad that people are liking this. This scene actually references two things: The Phantom Menace obviously, but the line you like is actually from that SOPRANOS episode where Chris shoots that guy in the foot for all those pastries...which is actually referencing GOODFELLAS. I thought it worked well here.
"Don't leave unwanted children" Lol
The animating, sound effects and voice is okay, but I really like the fitting music, lol
Thank you :)
Wow! The quality is amazing!
Did you do any tracing to make the characters look that way or did you draw them from memory or did you just look at pictures?
Really good either way.
Keep doing this!
Thanks ColonelMagus .
I did tracing for some parts of body but other then face features , hair , background i done it by myself.
The script is decent, the voice acting is okay, but might wanna work a little on the animating.
I still liked it though. Keep going!
I appreciate your feedback. I'm learning more about animation every day. Glad you liked it!
I always talk a lot to myself when I'm alone, and I like acting to myself, so that's a way I've kind of practiced my voices over time. I love gaming, skateboarding, watching movies and animations. If you need a voice actor, ask me. *wink* *wink* lol
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